Plot change # 34

When finalizing the plan for the opening of my film, I realized it was sort of formatted as a short story and would contain longer than 2 minutes of screen time. To fix this, I made some modifications to the storyboard, and the overall plot of the film.

For one, I cut out 3 of the scenes I initially planned on filming, to slow the pace of the film. Because of this, I will have to fit in more stereotypes into the scenes that I am keeping and focus more on character body language to display this. I added in less dialogue after realizing it was pretty difficult to make my actor's lines sound professional.

I will include more angles of each shot, and slow down how frequently I go from shot to shot.

 

The overall plot remains the same, but will include more side characters than before, to create a more realistic environment. These extras will be people from my casting call who did not get the role but are still able to help me film. With these modifications, the Opening to the film should be more meaningful, and serve as an introduction to a film, rather than a short film itself.